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1) You need to break this down across multiple posts. This is TOO DEEP for one article. I love depth, but articles need time for absorption & discussion at each level. Lord of the Rings was submitted as 1 long novel & broken into the trilogy we know & love today.

2) Ensemble requires a level of background on the characters involved. W the MCU, they introduced the individual character films first: Iron Man, Thor, Capt America, Hulk, etc. Afterward, they could do an ensemble film ("Avengers") which didn't need as much backstory on each character to understand & could get straight to the action which had been percolating in every film the whole time.

Compare that to "The Marvels" where noone knows anything about anyone, nor cares. So in 2 hrs of runtime, they have to give each character enough screen time to make us care about them, their lives, & their contribution to the story & not see them as merely Red Shirt Crewman #2 when they die in Act 2. Thus the story suffers because there's not enough space left to make the antagonist & his plan for world domination or whatever meaningful also.

Avengers worked.

Marvels failed.

3) This returns me back to comment #1. You've written an ensemble article where each part is important, but there's only so much headspace for people wrap around the concepts.

Lesson 1: Character introduction stories.

Lesson 2: Underlying common tension in each story.

Lesson 3: Bringing the characters together to defeat the common enemy.

You've written Marvels which discussing Avengers.

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